Please read my story?

the town was nothing but a vision. a flash of what she deeply wanted to see, a haven that would shelter her from her war stricken world. But, in a blink it returned to the somber landscape, stained by death. she stared deeply into the barren field as if she was looking through it but soon came back with tug of her sleeve from Amy. " Never mind it was nothing." Chloe said in a soft voice, "we have to keep moving." as they faded into the horizon looking for a sign of hope, the clouds returned. this time it was only a soft rain that leaked out of the clouds, washing the country side of its fowl odor.